Saturday, October 23, 2010

compare&contrast paragraph about two films

The Miracle Worker is more effective than Angela's Ashes in some ways.The first reason is the characters and their attitudes.Although their topic is similar to each other ,struggling for something is clear in The miracle worker.Annie is struggling for Helen who is a deaf and blind child.She wants to teach her and at the end of the movie ,she succeeds.However,we can't find it in Angela's Ashes.Angela loses her three children,but then she gives birth to two children.While I was watching the movie, I was expecting something very hard and because of this , Angela forgot about herself, but it didn't happen.The other one is their theme.The theme is explained clearly in the Miracle Worker,so the movie is shorter than the other one, but I think someone can't understand exactly Angela's Ashes's theme.The last thing is language.In Angela's Ashes,there are lots of idioms,some unfamiliar words.As the struggling for a child , the theme and the language is explained clearly ,I think the miracle worker is much more effective than the other one.

2 comments:

  1. evrimmm:)
    your paragraph is effective and clearly understandable,but if you mentioned its similarities a bit longer it would be more effective thats all..

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  2. Hi!
    your paragraph is nice and was written wrongless. anyone not watching that movies can imagine as if s/he has watched.
    Well done!

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