While I was a child, I understood that Gaziantep was a dangerous city. A man came and looked at my bracelets. Then he said that he would buy a candy if I gave my gold bracelets.I gave my bracelets,he bought a candy for me.After I returned to my home ,my mother realized that I didn’t have my bracelets.Then I noticed that Gaziantep was very dangerous city to live without being hurt and crime rate was very high.
One of the reasons why crime rate is high is arm that is legal.Owing to this law,people,especially adolescents,tend to take up arms.If adolescents have weapons with them,there will probably be murderers.Adolescents are angry about everything such as world,their families,their friends.They are easily annoyed.If they are angry with someone, they tend to use their weapons as the weapons make them courageous in their future life.Their future life are their university life,so there will be demonstration in the universities.At the end of the demonstration ,there will be many death people.I believe that if someone is angry about someone or something,there isn’t anything he/she can’t do.If many university students have weapons with them,many terrorist actions are hihg. In Turkey , terorist actions are one of the main problems.In our country , there are many events that affect our people. Due to this law , there will be many terorists actions in universities.Consequently, many young people have been into prison . Most of them die without any reason.
The other reason is lacking of education. People who don’t have education is probably unemployed. Unemployment is one of the main problem in Turkey. Unemployment affects people negatively. Some people can feel depressed. Because of this depression , they commit suicide or kill their family members.
Gaziantep is a dangerous place. There are two main reason why crime rate is very high. One of them is arm that allow to be use legally. The other one is education. If you want to live in a safer country, arm should be banned.
Sunday, December 19, 2010
Wednesday, October 27, 2010
CONVENTİONAL MEDİCİNE DOESN'T HELP CANCER PATİENTS
Nonconventional medicine is the way that people use to improve their health, but people don't know if their treatment works or not.I think it is sometimes a good treatment for people's health.For example , if you catch a cold , there are lots of way to feel better without any pills or any kind of medication;however, it can be seen as a wrong treatment by some people.When we examine most of cancer patients or some pills that affect people's health badly or some kind of alternative therapies, we can understand nonconventional medicine make us feel better than the other kind.
There are three important event that we can understand nonconventional medicine's positive effect.I think the most important one is cancer treatments.Everybody know cancer is a fatal disease, but we can't say all cancer patients will die.This disease requires some treatments such as chemotheraphy, radiotherapy and surgery.Many cancer patients have these treatment,but %96 of all cancer patients die.Is this a successful treatment for cancer?The other thing I can say is pills.Some pills are bad effect on our body.They can even be fatal.For example,some pills have strong effect on heart and people who take the pills can die of heart attack.At the same time, they can destroy people's kidney.The last one is nonconventional medicine for high blood pressure.High blood pressure can develop without signs or symptoms and exist for years;however,unknown high blood pressure can result in serious health risk such as heart attack,so alternative therapies such as acupuncture, yoga can help.
Nonconventional medicine , also known as alternative medicine , can help us feel better.Why is it effectice?The answer is simple: people know what they can do for their health, that is they can know the best treatment.Because of this , their treatment will be successful.I think alternative medicine is the best way to feel better if your illness is not more serious.
There are three important event that we can understand nonconventional medicine's positive effect.I think the most important one is cancer treatments.Everybody know cancer is a fatal disease, but we can't say all cancer patients will die.This disease requires some treatments such as chemotheraphy, radiotherapy and surgery.Many cancer patients have these treatment,but %96 of all cancer patients die.Is this a successful treatment for cancer?The other thing I can say is pills.Some pills are bad effect on our body.They can even be fatal.For example,some pills have strong effect on heart and people who take the pills can die of heart attack.At the same time, they can destroy people's kidney.The last one is nonconventional medicine for high blood pressure.High blood pressure can develop without signs or symptoms and exist for years;however,unknown high blood pressure can result in serious health risk such as heart attack,so alternative therapies such as acupuncture, yoga can help.
Nonconventional medicine , also known as alternative medicine , can help us feel better.Why is it effectice?The answer is simple: people know what they can do for their health, that is they can know the best treatment.Because of this , their treatment will be successful.I think alternative medicine is the best way to feel better if your illness is not more serious.
Saturday, October 23, 2010
compare&contrast paragraph about two films
The Miracle Worker is more effective than Angela's Ashes in some ways.The first reason is the characters and their attitudes.Although their topic is similar to each other ,struggling for something is clear in The miracle worker.Annie is struggling for Helen who is a deaf and blind child.She wants to teach her and at the end of the movie ,she succeeds.However,we can't find it in Angela's Ashes.Angela loses her three children,but then she gives birth to two children.While I was watching the movie, I was expecting something very hard and because of this , Angela forgot about herself, but it didn't happen.The other one is their theme.The theme is explained clearly in the Miracle Worker,so the movie is shorter than the other one, but I think someone can't understand exactly Angela's Ashes's theme.The last thing is language.In Angela's Ashes,there are lots of idioms,some unfamiliar words.As the struggling for a child , the theme and the language is explained clearly ,I think the miracle worker is much more effective than the other one.
Friday, May 21, 2010
The Peaceful World(revised descriptive essay)
The world I live is not known by anybody.This place serves only me and because of this, it is my own world.When I was a young child ,I was playing in it . Now,It is the place in which I study,watch movies and listen to music in tranquality.It contains some special things that belong to me .
Firstly ,as you open the door, you feel the mystery.Many years ago, my brother had this room .When my parents bought the house he didn’t want to move because he wanted to stay the previous home, but there was a place that enjoys in the house.This room was his favorite place and he died in it and now, I have it.Although I don't believe it , everybody who comes to my room feels it.The other thing , it is a cozy place and what makes it cozy is the wall's colour.The colour is purple ,but it is not dark purple.It affects your mood since you enter it.At the right side of the room, there is bed.It belonged to my brother and in front of you,you can see my bed.It's near the window.Due to this,while you are listening music,you can enjoy the sky's beauty.At the corner,my computer sits on the desk and at the bottom of it,there are some movies that wait you to watch ..You can choose one of them and you enjoy it.Another thing is bookcases.Actually, this bookcase belongs to my father.It is composed of his books and it is like a small library.You can find whatever you want.
It is my world.When I was a young child ,I didn't like my room, but now I like its peaceful atmosphere.
Firstly ,as you open the door, you feel the mystery.Many years ago, my brother had this room .When my parents bought the house he didn’t want to move because he wanted to stay the previous home, but there was a place that enjoys in the house.This room was his favorite place and he died in it and now, I have it.Although I don't believe it , everybody who comes to my room feels it.The other thing , it is a cozy place and what makes it cozy is the wall's colour.The colour is purple ,but it is not dark purple.It affects your mood since you enter it.At the right side of the room, there is bed.It belonged to my brother and in front of you,you can see my bed.It's near the window.Due to this,while you are listening music,you can enjoy the sky's beauty.At the corner,my computer sits on the desk and at the bottom of it,there are some movies that wait you to watch ..You can choose one of them and you enjoy it.Another thing is bookcases.Actually, this bookcase belongs to my father.It is composed of his books and it is like a small library.You can find whatever you want.
It is my world.When I was a young child ,I didn't like my room, but now I like its peaceful atmosphere.
Wednesday, May 19, 2010
Specialities of Gaziantep(process)
It is important tradition for Turkish people.Turkish people love it very much.For children ,itmeans entertainment and for adults ,it means togetherness.Everyone either adults or children enjoy it.What is it? It is the Ramadan feast.Ramadab feast is celebrated by every kind of person in Turkish and in my hometown, Gaziantep's people have some specialities for the feast.
Gaziantep's people are known by their eating habits and because of this habit,people makespecial meals for ramadan .The first speciality is Yuvalama. I can say yuvalama is for this feast.Everybody in Gaziantep has to make this special meal.While you are eating it , you feel its delicious taste.This is enjoyable part of it and making it is difficult part of it.It is too difficult to make on your own.The person who wants to make yuvalama has to call for her neigbours or friends.It takes much more time than any other meal.The first preparation for feast is yuvalama and then making cookies take second stage.cookies with pistachio or cacao have to be made. ın every home, there are cookies. cookies are the most delicious things. The other preparation is baklava or kadayıf. Gaziantep is famous for pictachio and baklava. Due to this, baklava is important for us .
The aim of feast is gathering people and provide people, who don't see each other for long year, too see each other and due to this, people some preparations. Cleaning the house is the first thing. People clean their house for guest. The older people's house is more important than any other, because people come for their older relative. In this feast, the dead are unforgetable and people visit their relative's graves, pray for them. Before the feast, people go to the cemetery. The other thing is buying new clothes. Every item must be new from head to toe, especially for children. Children enjoy buying new clothes. They are happy with their new clothes, but buying something is really tiring. You cannot feel your feet after the shopping.
The last thing before the fest is presents. People give presents to their older relatives. For example, we give presents for my grandmothers. The present is always chocolate. These are prepared. Allowance is also important. Allowance which was given in a hankerchief long years ago is given in an usual way, but it must be prepared before.
Ramadan feast is special for everyone, but we, have lots of specialty. Yuvalama and cookies are the most important part of the feast. They are highly delicious although making them is really risky and difficult. Baklava is the other important thing, because we are a baklava city. Ramadan feast which means entertainment for children and togetherness for adults can make you tired while preparing something, but when you eat these special meals, you will forget about all your tiredness.
Gaziantep's people are known by their eating habits and because of this habit,people makespecial meals for ramadan .The first speciality is Yuvalama. I can say yuvalama is for this feast.Everybody in Gaziantep has to make this special meal.While you are eating it , you feel its delicious taste.This is enjoyable part of it and making it is difficult part of it.It is too difficult to make on your own.The person who wants to make yuvalama has to call for her neigbours or friends.It takes much more time than any other meal.The first preparation for feast is yuvalama and then making cookies take second stage.cookies with pistachio or cacao have to be made. ın every home, there are cookies. cookies are the most delicious things. The other preparation is baklava or kadayıf. Gaziantep is famous for pictachio and baklava. Due to this, baklava is important for us .
The aim of feast is gathering people and provide people, who don't see each other for long year, too see each other and due to this, people some preparations. Cleaning the house is the first thing. People clean their house for guest. The older people's house is more important than any other, because people come for their older relative. In this feast, the dead are unforgetable and people visit their relative's graves, pray for them. Before the feast, people go to the cemetery. The other thing is buying new clothes. Every item must be new from head to toe, especially for children. Children enjoy buying new clothes. They are happy with their new clothes, but buying something is really tiring. You cannot feel your feet after the shopping.
The last thing before the fest is presents. People give presents to their older relatives. For example, we give presents for my grandmothers. The present is always chocolate. These are prepared. Allowance is also important. Allowance which was given in a hankerchief long years ago is given in an usual way, but it must be prepared before.
Ramadan feast is special for everyone, but we, have lots of specialty. Yuvalama and cookies are the most important part of the feast. They are highly delicious although making them is really risky and difficult. Baklava is the other important thing, because we are a baklava city. Ramadan feast which means entertainment for children and togetherness for adults can make you tired while preparing something, but when you eat these special meals, you will forget about all your tiredness.
Thursday, May 13, 2010
The Reasons That Lead to Teenager Stress(cause and effect)
People who are under stress experience three stages.When people begin to realize stressor ,alarm reaction begins.After people realize the stressor, their organism tries to adapt the situation.They experience resistance stage, but if their organism can't adapt the stressor,their organism enters the stage of exhaustion.Many people can experience these stages , but stress affects teenagers more easily than adults.There are many reasons why teenagers are affected easily.
First,teenagers have to do some homeworks such as researc projects,writing term paper,assignments,presentations and taking many exams in order to have a good career.These are stressful events for teenagers.While they are doing homework,they need a great deal of effort.In addition to this effort ,the time is important to finish homework.If the deadline is near,they become highly stress.The other stressful thing is taking exams.Students during their life have to take many exams.These are the most worring thing for a teenager .For example,teenagers who study for university exam have to pass university exam.If they can't pass it they have to study one more year.This is vey stressful.Because of being afraid of failing exam,they feel stress during this year.They know that if they can't pass ,they have to study one more year,feel the same stress.These are very tiring experiences. They also worry about their future .As they want to have a good career , they enter this exam,but if they never win it,what are they do?These questions make them worry.
Pyschological events are also important for a teenager.These events affect them much more than other causes.What can pyschological events be?They are events such as friendships or changing their living places.While a good friendship affects people in agood way, a bad frienships affects people in a bad way.It make teenagers stress.
When a teenager has a problem ,listening to his/her problem or trying to solve his/her problem affect his/her mood positively;however , when you have a problem and if you are alone ,you can't resist the stressor .Changing places ,for example,changing a school is stressful.Changing a school means new friendships,new teachers,new exam styles.These are not easy events.
Family is inseperable part of their life and having good relationships with family make teenager progress.For example , a teenager who will take a university exam is really stressful because of this exam and parent's attitudes can make them highly stress.If the parents always say they have to study or in order to study they force them, the teenagers' life becomes unendurable.The death of a family member also affects them.Death of mother or father changes their life and the most difficult thing is living without him/her.It makes people deppressed,sad and some of them feel alone.
Stress have many causes among teenagers.As they have to pull up their socks in their homeworks or exams,they are under stress.If they have bad frienships or if they have to change their school,they become stressful.In additiıon to them,family is unforgettable.Death of family member can make them deppressed.
First,teenagers have to do some homeworks such as researc projects,writing term paper,assignments,presentations and taking many exams in order to have a good career.These are stressful events for teenagers.While they are doing homework,they need a great deal of effort.In addition to this effort ,the time is important to finish homework.If the deadline is near,they become highly stress.The other stressful thing is taking exams.Students during their life have to take many exams.These are the most worring thing for a teenager .For example,teenagers who study for university exam have to pass university exam.If they can't pass it they have to study one more year.This is vey stressful.Because of being afraid of failing exam,they feel stress during this year.They know that if they can't pass ,they have to study one more year,feel the same stress.These are very tiring experiences. They also worry about their future .As they want to have a good career , they enter this exam,but if they never win it,what are they do?These questions make them worry.
Pyschological events are also important for a teenager.These events affect them much more than other causes.What can pyschological events be?They are events such as friendships or changing their living places.While a good friendship affects people in agood way, a bad frienships affects people in a bad way.It make teenagers stress.
When a teenager has a problem ,listening to his/her problem or trying to solve his/her problem affect his/her mood positively;however , when you have a problem and if you are alone ,you can't resist the stressor .Changing places ,for example,changing a school is stressful.Changing a school means new friendships,new teachers,new exam styles.These are not easy events.
Family is inseperable part of their life and having good relationships with family make teenager progress.For example , a teenager who will take a university exam is really stressful because of this exam and parent's attitudes can make them highly stress.If the parents always say they have to study or in order to study they force them, the teenagers' life becomes unendurable.The death of a family member also affects them.Death of mother or father changes their life and the most difficult thing is living without him/her.It makes people deppressed,sad and some of them feel alone.
Stress have many causes among teenagers.As they have to pull up their socks in their homeworks or exams,they are under stress.If they have bad frienships or if they have to change their school,they become stressful.In additiıon to them,family is unforgettable.Death of family member can make them deppressed.
Friday, April 30, 2010
Freedom Fighters In Turkey(argumentative)
Turkey has always had some problems since the recorded history.Many years ago,there were many nationality in our country. Our grandfathers lived with people who are from different nations. For example ,in the east of Turkey , our grandfather lived together ,that is they got along with each other ,but then because of some events and some thoughts ,Terrorısm appeared.Terrorism is a bad event that causes many innocent people die and it doesn’t mean discrimintion among nations.
The most common group of terrorism in Turkey is pkk.The group was founded in 1974,but was formally founded in 1978. Why is the group bad for us? The first reason is their aims. The group wants to establish their own government.Owing to their aim ,we are fighting against each other.this fighting always results in many deaths.We have lost many soldiers ,many policemen, many innocent people since the outbreak of pkk. Many mothers cried for their sons, many children don’t have a father now and they have to live without feeling a father’s love for them. Wives have no more grief than mothers who lost their sons and children who lost their father, but these are not enough for them to reach their aim. Turkey has been fighting against pkk since 1984.We lost many people and we are still losing.In a documentary, it is stressed:In 1912-1913 Balkan War there were 4307 martries . In 1919-1922 Istiklal War there were 10.885 martries. . In 1953 Corea War there were 731 martries.In 1974,Cyprus Peace Operation ,there were 486 martries and 1984-..... struggling with pkk thousands of guards died.Thousands of compratiots died because of pkk.
Turkey has had many nations since hundreds of years.Turkey is a multinational country. we all lived together with Ermenian,Arabian and Kurdish people.For example,Hatay is full of Arabian people .and There are many Ermenian in all over Turkey and there are also many Kurdish people in all over turkey we are not against the people who are different from nations.We are against groups that want to seperate us .
Some kurdish people thnk that there are a discrimination between kurdish and turksh people.they can say they are not behaved in a friendly way.due tuthe fact that pkk composes of kurdish people,they can feel bad because of this.thay can think the government’s and people’s attitude toward them is different from the other,but we can’t say that every kurdish peopleareterrorist that fights for freedom.Every Kurdish people are not a freedom fighter.We are not against these people.we are against the people who aim to seperate us.
Terrorism affected badly many years ago.Now,it continues affecting us. We lost lots of people because of pkk’s aims .Turkey that is a multinational country and Turkish’s people lived together with other nations and we are against organizations,groups that affect us badly.If they are freedom fighter for them ,they are terrorists for us and we love freedom much more than them.One man’s terrorist can’t be another man’s freedom fighter.
The most common group of terrorism in Turkey is pkk.The group was founded in 1974,but was formally founded in 1978. Why is the group bad for us? The first reason is their aims. The group wants to establish their own government.Owing to their aim ,we are fighting against each other.this fighting always results in many deaths.We have lost many soldiers ,many policemen, many innocent people since the outbreak of pkk. Many mothers cried for their sons, many children don’t have a father now and they have to live without feeling a father’s love for them. Wives have no more grief than mothers who lost their sons and children who lost their father, but these are not enough for them to reach their aim. Turkey has been fighting against pkk since 1984.We lost many people and we are still losing.In a documentary, it is stressed:In 1912-1913 Balkan War there were 4307 martries . In 1919-1922 Istiklal War there were 10.885 martries. . In 1953 Corea War there were 731 martries.In 1974,Cyprus Peace Operation ,there were 486 martries and 1984-..... struggling with pkk thousands of guards died.Thousands of compratiots died because of pkk.
Turkey has had many nations since hundreds of years.Turkey is a multinational country. we all lived together with Ermenian,Arabian and Kurdish people.For example,Hatay is full of Arabian people .and There are many Ermenian in all over Turkey and there are also many Kurdish people in all over turkey we are not against the people who are different from nations.We are against groups that want to seperate us .
Some kurdish people thnk that there are a discrimination between kurdish and turksh people.they can say they are not behaved in a friendly way.due tuthe fact that pkk composes of kurdish people,they can feel bad because of this.thay can think the government’s and people’s attitude toward them is different from the other,but we can’t say that every kurdish peopleareterrorist that fights for freedom.Every Kurdish people are not a freedom fighter.We are not against these people.we are against the people who aim to seperate us.
Terrorism affected badly many years ago.Now,it continues affecting us. We lost lots of people because of pkk’s aims .Turkey that is a multinational country and Turkish’s people lived together with other nations and we are against organizations,groups that affect us badly.If they are freedom fighter for them ,they are terrorists for us and we love freedom much more than them.One man’s terrorist can’t be another man’s freedom fighter.
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